Friday, November 03, 2006
Script to art comparison
As I mentioned in my last post, here's the page of script I wrote for this page of art, which has been released by DC.
It's a very benign page in that it doesn't give away ANYTHING in terms of the larger story, nothing that hasn't been revealed in interviews so far, anyway. But it's a good example of the type of thought that Pat Gleason puts into his art.
Aside from the dynamic composition, I like the fact that he didn't feel bound to what I was asking for specifically. He gave me what I wanted but wasn't afraid to do it his way and, personally, I like to see an artist make their own choices and use their own imaginations instead of being a slave to mine. I want to work with people who think independently, not who approach the job as robots. If I want something interepreted exactly the way I see it, I make a point to ask for it that way. Otherwise, I hope to be surprised when I see the pages come in.
Prentis Rollins also added a lot with his inks on this page, really solidifying the art. It's a great looking book, I'm lucky to be working with these guys.
Anyway, enough rambling from me, here's the script...
We’re in a large holding cell. The Dominators are looking down from inside the open partition set high up in the wall. They’re all shielding their eyes. Below them--
A Khund warrior, Uruk, is strapped to a futuristic medical table, bound at his hands, feet, and neck by chains composed of pure energy. His body is bowed outwards as he strains with all his might, every muscle about to rupture, struggling in vain to free himself from his bonds. He’s screaming, his eyes clenched tightly shut, straining to look away.
Uruk has been deliberately positioned to face a large, glowing asteroid held in position by a crane like device directly over him. Swirling, rainbow-colored waves of radiation emanate from the space rock and buffet the Khund in an unrelenting storm of cosmic energy.
It looks like it really hurts.
1- CASTE LEADER #1: Your work shows potential.
Billions of years ago, the oldest and most powerful beings in existence, the Guardians of the Universe, created a police force to serve and protect every sector of space. Recruited for their bravery and courage, from planets across the universe, the best and brightest serve proudly as members of the intergalactic peacekeepers known as THE GREEN LANTERN CORPS!
TITLE: THE DARK SIDE OF GREEN (part one)
Writer: Keith Champagne
Penciller: Patrick Gleason
Inker: Prentis Rollins
Associate editor: Michael Siglain
Dominator: Peter Tomasi
Posted by keith champagne at 7:22 PM
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Thanks for showing us that! I really enjoy seeing your scripts. That page is wonderful, you must get a real kick out of seeing your writing take form like that. Really looking forward to it.
Very interesting. I enjoyed the behind the scenes look at how the pages develop.
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